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Host graph construction needs to produce complete sizing before device work. Previously, Graph body populations and queue overflow were discovered during upload, after the Definition block had already been copied. This change makes Host build validate Definitions and derive complete queue capacities before program-mode allocation or H2D.

Scope

H1 only, based directly on main. One commit, 12 files, +1,212 / -550 lines. The old K1 snapshot is removed entirely: no ctx_control state machine, scalar-count wire change, kernel entry stubs or eager worker dlsym changes remain. H1 does not depend on an unmerged K1 ABI.

Behavior

  • simpler::hbg::build_graph runs Host orchestration, validates retained/spilled Definitions and each Graph invocation's execution storage, counts every reachable body, and derives queue capacities. Exact capacity succeeds; one excess task fails before device mutation.
  • A shared Definition packing plan retains object offsets and spill ownership. upload_for_program_mode uploads that plan and consumes the already-derived capacities, then binds and copies a fresh compact runtime image.
  • Staging growth publishes its new base in both the Definition records and LeasedWorkspace before a fallible copy. Repeated upload and failed-copy retry retain valid sources and do not accumulate queue populations or relocate the original virtual-heap mirror.
  • LeasedWorkspace groups the borrowed RuntimeContext, SM mirror and Definition staging. GraphBuild cannot be copied or moved; a failed rebuild invalidates its previous measurements. Upload rejects a different RuntimeContext before device actions.
  • Program execution continues to call build and upload in sequence. Kernel resource prepare, serialization, registration and launch remain separate integration work; kernel capture must never call this allocating, synchronous program upload path.

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Addresses poursoul's consolidated review:

Review items Resolution
§0, 2.2, 3.2, 4.4 Remove the obsolete K1 snapshot, including the questioned eager dlsym, private aliases and scalar-count ABI additions. No replacement kernel ABI is introduced here.
2.1 Move complete Graph body measurement, Definition validation and queue-capacity derivation into build. Upload consumes the resulting plan.
2.3, 2.7 Introduce LeasedWorkspace; reduce build's arguments from ten to six; explicitly delete GraphBuild copy/move. Original unique_ptr ownership already prevented a copied GraphBuild from compiling. The caller must still enforce the workspace lease.
2.4, 3.6 Use build_complete as a validity bit, clear measurements on rebuild and test failure/recovery. No Uploaded state or counter: upload does not consume the source, and retries remain valid.
2.5, 2.6 Share Definition packing/upload and keep its plan opaque in the build header. Arch-specific runtime image/scheduler wiring remains in its separately linked runtime DSO. Further common orchestration extraction and a fully opaque GraphBuild are deferred; these C++ types are internal implementation state, not a plugin/wire ABI.
3.1, 3.4–3.8 Use simpler::hbg, document build as the construction/sizing part of bind, name fields bind_usage/host_sm_handle and rename upload_for_program_mode. Retain build_graph/GraphBuild as operation/result names.
3.3 No error-code naming or ABI additions remain.
4.1–4.3 Correct the dep-gen callsite comment, remove the redundant orchestrator clear, remove task-specific AGENTS changes, and provide a self-contained checked-in contract.
4.5 Count submitted tasks once during build; actual uploads retain individual transfer spans.
§5 Read the failed network1 job log: three TMR L3/L4 cases reported communication teardown and AICore/scheduler errors. Resource contention is not established solely by concurrent PR runs. The revised diff contains no platform/worker/TMR changes; fresh CI is required.

The architecture comparison uses the previously supplied sealed v9 design (Host build/H2D separation and pre-capture capacity preparation). The live ?i=2#v9-design URL could not be refreshed because HTTPS terminated with SSL EOF. The checked-in contract states the applicable invariants directly and needs no private attachment or external site to be reviewed.

Validation

  • Before fixing, regression tests reproduced missing in-Graph populations and overflow detected only by upload on both architectures.
  • 16 H1 cases per architecture passed, including exact/over-limit queues, malformed Definitions, workspace mismatch, failed rebuild recovery and repeated upload after staging growth.
  • Both H1 suites passed AddressSanitizer with leak detection. The installed GCC ASan runtime required its library directory in the test environment.
  • Editable runtime rebuild passed on current main.
  • HBG simulation with pinned PTO ISA: A2/A3 20 passed, 7 skipped; A5 21 passed.
  • Applicable pre-commit checks and mkdocs build --strict passed.
  • No local hardware run: every queried device had nonzero HBM use. No mixed ACLGraph capture/replay, CSA accuracy or performance claim.

Downstream integration

The older cumulative drafts #2172#2175 require rebasing onto this H1 result. Their consumers must adopt simpler::hbg, LeasedWorkspace, build_complete/bind_usage and upload_for_program_mode. Graph body populations are now complete at build time and must not be added again by downstream sizing. This draft does not carry those later milestones.

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The change separates HBG host graph construction from program-mode upload. It adds shared graph-definition packing and staging APIs, architecture-specific build and upload wiring, tests for success and recovery paths, and contract documentation.

Changes

HBG staged build flow

Layer / File(s) Summary
HBG interfaces and definition plan
src/common/host_build_graph/host_graph_build.h, src/common/host_build_graph/graph_definition_pack.h, src/common/host_build_graph/graph_host_state.h, src/common/host_build_graph/host/graph_definition_pack.cpp
Adds GraphBuild, LeasedWorkspace, packed definition records, and declarations for build, packing, upload, and staging rebinding.
Graph construction and validation
src/a2a3/runtime/host_build_graph/host/runtime_maker.cpp, src/a5/runtime/host_build_graph/host/runtime_maker.cpp, src/common/host_build_graph/host/graph_definition_pack.cpp, src/common/host_build_graph/host/orchestrator.cpp
Splits orchestration into build_graph, validates inputs and definitions, derives queue capacities, and records graph measurements.
Definition and runtime upload
src/a2a3/runtime/host_build_graph/host/runtime_maker.cpp, src/a5/runtime/host_build_graph/host/runtime_maker.cpp, src/common/host_build_graph/host/graph_definition_pack.cpp
Adds upload_for_program_mode, uploads packed definitions, commits device regions, copies the runtime image, and keeps the existing wrapper flow.
Architecture tests and contract documentation
tests/ut/cpp/common/test_hbg_host_graph_build.cpp, tests/ut/cpp/CMakeLists.txt, docs/host-build-graph-kernel-contract.md, mkdocs.yml, src/common/host_build_graph/dep_gen_host_graph.h
Adds a2a3 and a5 tests for build, upload, overflow, staging, retry, and failure paths. Documents and links the HBG kernel contract.

Priority: ➖ Normal

Estimated code review effort: 4 (Complex) | ~45 minutes

Change: Bug fix

Sequence Diagram(s)

sequenceDiagram
  participant Caller
  participant build_graph
  participant pack_graph_definitions
  participant upload_for_program_mode
  participant Device
  Caller->>build_graph: provide staged workspace and entry points
  build_graph->>pack_graph_definitions: validate and pack definitions
  pack_graph_definitions-->>build_graph: return plan and queue populations
  build_graph-->>Caller: return completed GraphBuild
  Caller->>upload_for_program_mode: submit GraphBuild
  upload_for_program_mode->>Device: upload definitions and runtime image
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Merge Risk: 🔵 Low · up to caf9d

This change splits host graph construction from program-mode upload and moves validation and queue sizing ahead of any device allocation, with new tests covering success, overflow, malformed definitions, and retry paths. No functional or data-integrity problems were found. The remaining concern is that the sizing and queue-measurement logic is copy-pasted into both architecture files, which risks the two paths drifting apart in future changes; it is safe to merge with that follow-up in mind.

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@TaoZQY TaoZQY changed the title Refactor: separate HBG host graph construction from program upload Refactor: [H1] separate HBG host build from device upload Sep 10, 2026

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PR #2171 评审意见(整合版)

PRRefactor: [H1] separate HBG host build from device upload
作者:TaoZQY | 状态:Draft | merge-basea1aa7fddhead458c0243
评审日期:2026-09-10

评审原则:只要问题存在于 #2171 的 diff 中,即为本 PR 的有效检视意见,
不因其源自携带的 K1 快照而豁免。


0. 变更规模

Bucket 文件 churn
Core 21 1583
Test/Ex 10 1181
Docs 4 38
Build 4 8
TOTAL 40 2811

⚠️ Oversized PR:Core 1583 行已超过 1000 行阈值,单次通读难以完整把握。

其中 H1 本身的改动为 851 行 / 10 文件(隔离 diff 5612d48...fa81999),
其余约 1960 行为 K1 快照。本文档对两部分一视同仁。

一条结构性意见

单个 squash commit 同时装着 K1 和 H1,且 PR body 自承 upstream #2064 has advanced
实测两边确已分叉:本 PR 快照里的 kernel_ctx_control.h / kernel_ctx_control.cpp /
test_kernel_ctx_control.cpp(含 SimplerKernelCtxControl wire struct 与
CONFIGURE/FREEZE 状态机)在 #2064 当前 head 上已整体不存在

这意味着:本 PR 目前包含一份已被上游放弃的设计。审阅者对这部分投入的时间,
以及本文档第 4 节的部分意见,都会在 rebase 时失效。

建议:要么 rebase 到 #2064 当前 head 后再评审,要么明确标注 K1 部分「不在本轮评审范围」。
保持现状的代价是——审阅者无法区分哪些代码是要合入的、哪些是快照残留。


1. H1 机制简述

改动把原来单一的 run_host_orchestration 按**「测量」vs「提交」**切成两半:

  • hbg::build_graph —— 跑 host orchestration,把测量值
    image_bytesheap_bytesBindUsage)存进 GraphBuild不碰任何 device 资源
  • hbg::upload_program_graph —— 读 GraphBuild,提交 device region、做 H2D

GraphBuild 拥有 OrchestratorStategraph_statesm_handle,但只借用 SM mirror
和 Definition staging(所有权留在 caller 的 pipeline slot 租约)。build.ready 作为状态闸门。

已验证正确的关键点

以下几处容易出错,实测都是对的:

  1. OrchestratorState 复用安全 —— init()this->~OrchestratorState() + placement new
    原地重建,pool cursor 全清零,同一个 GraphBuild 重复 build 不会累积脏状态
  2. rt->ops 置 nullptr 后能恢复 —— 每次 build_graph 内部都调 runtime_bind_ops(rt)
    src/a2a3/runtime/host_build_graph/host/runtime_maker.cpp:657
  3. 重复 upload 幂等 —— graph_record_definition 只读,不推进 arena_cursor
    ready_queue_populations按值拷贝进 upload 的局部变量,bind_graph_definitions
    的 mutation 不会跨 upload 累积。这个拷贝是刻意的,不要「优化」成引用
  4. sm_handle 必须搬进 GraphBuild —— a5 的 create_scheduler_state 在 upload
    阶段仍需读它
  5. a2a3/a5 完全对称,无遗漏

graph_host_rebind_staging 是真正的功能性修复

不是重构副产品。staging 增长搬家后,若不在 copy_to_device 失败前 publish 新 base,
graph_state.arena.base 会指向已释放的旧块 —— 下次 upload/retry 从悬垂指针读。
放在 copy 之前是正确的。main 上没有这个 bug,因为原来根本不支持重复 upload。

测试质量 👍

tests/ut/cpp/common/test_hbg_host_graph_build.cpp 精确覆盖了拆分引入的新风险面:

  • FailedBuildCannotBeUploaded —— 守住 ready 闸门
  • RepeatedUploadPreservesImageAndVirtualHeapSource —— 验证 virtual-address 源不被破坏,
    并测了 heap base 变化后的 rebase
  • FailedDefinitionCopyAfterGrowthCanBeRetriedRepeatedUploadAfterDefinitionStagingGrowth
    —— 精确覆盖 rebind 修复

Platform fake 用 fail_copy 做故障注入,是干净的做法。


2. 架构设计问题

2.1 测量与提交的边界没切干净 🔴 最实质

PR 立意是「build 只测量、upload 才提交」,但两项纯计算留在了 upload 侧

  • derive_ready_queue_capacities —— 纯函数,population → capacity,无任何 device 依赖
  • ready_queue_populations 的 graph 任务部分

根因是 bind_graph_definitions 内部自身就是测量+提交混合

copy_to_device(block, staging, block_bytes)   ← 提交
ready_queue_populations->add(...)             ← 测量,且在提交之后

后果是实质性的:

  • 只要 workload 含 Graph 任务,GraphBuild 就不是完整描述 ——
    ready_queue_populations 缺 in-graph 任务那部分。而 PR body 声称
    「让 kernel-mode 消费者在提交 device 工作前检查并序列化 graph」,这个目标
    对含 Graph 的负载并不成立
  • 纯 sizing 错误只能在 upload 时暴露SIMPLER_ERROR_READY_QUEUE_OVERFLOW
    是逻辑超限,本该 build 阶段判定;现在 build 返回成功、upload 才报错,
    而且报错时 Definition block 已经 copy 到 device 了

这是「函数切开了,但内部耦合没解开」。要真正达成立意,需先把
bind_graph_definitions 拆成 pack_definitions(测量,出 populations)

  • upload_definitions(提交)。

2.2 五个 kernel 符号全部 eager dlsym,旧 .so 硬失败 🔴

ChipWorker::init 中 5 个符号无条件 eager 加载,而 load_symbol 缺符号即抛异常
src/common/worker/chip_worker.cpp:259-264):

kernel_ctx_control_fn_      = load_symbol<...>(handle, "simpler_kernel_mode_ctx_control");
kernel_supported_fn_        = load_symbol<...>(handle, "simpler_kernel_mode_supported");
kernel_init_fn_             = load_symbol<...>(handle, "simpler_kernel_mode_init");
kernel_prepare_callable_fn_ = load_symbol<...>(handle, "simpler_kernel_mode_prepare_callable");
kernel_launch_fn_           = load_symbol<...>(handle, "simpler_kernel_mode_launch");

后果:任何旧的预编译 host_runtime.so 会让 ChipWorker::init 直接抛异常
即使用户完全不碰 kernel mode。而本 PR 中所有 backend 的 supported() 都返回 0 ——
为 5 个当前无任何真实实现的符号,把整个 worker 初始化变成硬失败点。

已有现成的能力协商机制 simpler_kernel_mode_supported(),合理分层应是:

符号 定位 理由
simpler_kernel_mode_supported 必需 能力探测入口,必须永远可调
simpler_kernel_mode_ctx_control 可论证必需 承载 PROGRAM/KERNEL 的 mode 声明
initprepare_callablelaunch 应当可选 仅在 supported() 非 0 后需要,lazy 解析即可

现设计等于说「能力探测函数与被探测的能力本身,绑定在同一必需性等级」,探测就失去意义。

建议:三者改为 lazy 解析(首次进入 kernel 路径时才 dlsym),
或在 init 阶段用不抛异常的软加载。

补充:四个 platform variant 的 CMakeLists 都加了 stub 源文件,覆盖是完整的
问题只在于用户拿到新 wheel 必须重新 pip install 才行。

2.3 GraphBuild 混合所有权与借用,类型上看不出来

struct GraphBuild {
    OrchestratorState orchestrator;      // 拥有
    GraphHostStatePtr graph_state;       // 拥有
    SharedMemoryHandle sm_handle;        // 拥有
    void *host_sm{nullptr};              // 借用,租约在 caller
    ...
};

host_sm 是裸指针、生命周期由 caller 的 pipeline slot 租约管,却与拥有型成员平铺。
当前靠 header 中 6 行注释维持约定 —— 注释是对的,但约束没有落到类型上
一旦被 kernel-mode 消费者拿去用,误 copy 一份即是双重释放/悬垂。

建议:把借用部分包成具名类型(如 LeasedWorkspace { void *sm_mirror; uint64_t bytes; }),
让 reader 一眼区分。

2.4 ready 用单 bool 表达三态状态机

实际状态是 Empty → Built → Uploaded,且 Built 还需区分「从未 build」与「build 失败」。
FailedBuildCannotBeUploaded 这个 case 里,build 中途失败时 graph_state 可能已分配、
orchestrator 已 init,半初始化状态就留在 struct 里,只靠 ready=false 挡住。

另外「可重复 upload」是本 PR 新增能力,但状态里没有任何东西记录已 upload 过几次
—— 幂等性完全依赖下层 setup_static_arena 的短路,契约上没有表达。

2.5 公共 header + 两份 arch 实现 = 同名公共符号双实现

src/common/host_build_graph/host_graph_build.h 放在 common 下,但
hbg::build_graphhbg::upload_program_graph实现有两份,分别在 a2a3 和 a5 的
runtime_maker.cpp,各约 190 行、高度重复。

重构前 run_host_orchestration 是 anonymous namespace 的 static 函数,重复至少是 TU 内部的事。
现在提升为跨 TU 公共符号,「common 头声明 + 两份不同实现」只靠 .so 边界不冲突。
读者看到 src/common/ 下的声明会自然假设有共同实现,实际没有。

属于既有问题被这次重构放大 —— 拆分正是收敛它们的时机。

2.6 GraphBuild 对声称的消费者暴露过宽

header 直接摊开了 OrchestratorStateSharedMemoryHandleReadyQueuePopulations
等重型内部类型。而 PR 声称的消费者需求只是「inspect and serialize」——
实际要的是 image_bytesheap_bytestotal_tasks 那几个测量值。

结果是这个「契约头」把整个 orchestrator 内部状态变成了公共 ABI 面。
后续 H2/H3 想改 OrchestratorState 布局,就得动这个头。

2.7 build_graph 参数表 10 个

拆分后原本函数内部自取的上下文全被顶到签名上。host_sm + sm_size + task_capacity
三者实为一组(即那个 leased workspace),runtime 还只被读了一次(算 block_dim)。
典型的「拆了函数但没配套抽参数对象」。


3. 命名问题

3.1 全局 hbgsimpler::hbg 撞名 🔴

新 header 开的是全局作用域namespace hbg;而 simpler::hbg 定义在
src/common/host_build_graph/tensor.h:31,全仓 12+ 文件在用(Tensormake_tensor_external 等)。

新 UT 里两者同文件出现

hbg::GraphBuild result;                       // 全局 hbg
simpler::hbg::make_tensor_external(...);      // simpler::hbg

当前能编译(都写在全局作用域),但这是潜伏陷阱:日后任何写在 namespace simpler {}
里的代码,hbg::GraphBuild 会先查到 simpler::hbg,然后找不到 GraphBuild

建议:并入 simpler::hbg,或换一个不冲突的名字。现在改成本最低。

3.2 项目名前缀漏进 C++ 类内私有别名 🔴 零 ABI 风险

先界定该带前缀的部分extern "C" 导出符号(simpler_kernel_mode_init 等)
与跨 ABI 的 wire struct/enum(SimplerKernelCtxControlSIMPLER_MODE_*
带前缀是正确的。C 没有命名空间,host_runtime.sodlopen 进已载入
CANN/ACL/HCCL 的进程,符号冲突的失败模式是 dlsym 静默拿到错误的那个
不是编译报错。这也是 cudaMallocaclrtMallocncclCommInitRank 的做法。
codestyle 规则 9 对此有明确豁免:

Exempt externally-consumed names where a blind rename would break a contract
— public API, ABI / linked symbols, serialized or on-wire names…

问题在漏出去的部分。 本 PR 在 src/common/worker/chip_worker.h:299-303
新增了 5 个 C++ 类内私有别名,全部带了 Simpler 前缀:

using SimplerKernelCtxControlFn     = decltype(&simpler_kernel_mode_ctx_control);
using SimplerKernelSupportedFn      = decltype(&simpler_kernel_mode_supported);
using SimplerKernelInitFn           = decltype(&simpler_kernel_mode_init);
using SimplerKernelPrepareCallableFn = decltype(&simpler_kernel_mode_prepare_callable);
using SimplerKernelLaunchFn         = decltype(&simpler_kernel_mode_launch);

这 5 个是 ChipWorker 类内私有类型别名,作用域已被 ChipWorker:: 限定死,
永不出现在符号表,不可能冲突Simpler 这 7 个字符信息量为

事实澄清:该文件 270-279 行已有 6 个 Simpler*FnSimplerInitFnSimplerRunFn 等),
所以新增的是在跟随既有约定,不是凭空引入。但同一 private: 块里也活着另一套
—— 8 个 Comm*FnCommBarrierFnCommDestroyFn 等),对应的同样是 extern "C"
导出符号(comm_barrier 等),却都没带前缀。

即:文件里并存两套约定,新代码选了较差的那一套

按 codestyle 规则 9「replacing the disambiguation it provided with
clear names or a namespace」,正确的名字是 KernelCtxControlFn
KernelSupportedFnKernelInitFnKernelPrepareCallableFnKernelLaunchFn

  • 纯 C++ 类内改名,不碰任何 ABI
  • decltype(&simpler_kernel_mode_*) 右边的导出符号名保持不变
  • 只改新增的 5 个,既有 6 个不动(那是独立的清理工作)

另有一处佐证:本 PR 自己新增的纯 C++ 内部类 KernelCtxControlState
KernelExecutionState没带前缀 ✅。这两个才是真正的业务逻辑所在
(状态机、mutex、ordering 规则),做对了。那 5 个别名更没有理由带。

判定表

类别 例子 该不该带
extern "C" 导出符号 simpler_kernel_mode_init 该带 — dlsym 防冲突,规则 9 豁免
跨 ABI wire struct/enum SimplerKernelCtxControlSIMPLER_MODE_KERNEL 该带 — 外部逐字节对齐的契约
C++ 类内私有别名 SimplerKernelCtxControlFn ×5 不该带 ❌ 作用域已限定,零信息量
C++ 内部类 KernelCtxControlState 已经没带 ✅

3.3 同一 header 内三套项目名前缀并存

src/common/worker/runtime_c_api.h 的错误码 enum,本 PR 新增两条:

PTO_RUNTIME_ERR_INVALID_STATE     = PTO_RUNTIME_ERR_BASE - 3,   // 新增,用 PTO_ 遗留前缀
PTO_RUNTIME_ERR_CAPACITY_EXCEEDED = PTO_RUNTIME_ERR_BASE - 4,   // 新增,用 PTO_ 遗留前缀
SIMPLER_NATIVE_RUN_POLL_ERROR     = ...                          // 既有,用 SIMPLER_

PTO_ 是项目改名前的旧前缀。该头里现同时活着 PTO_RUNTIME_*SIMPLER_*
Simpler* 三套,与 codestyle 规则 10「项目叫 simpler」不符。

这条有可辩护性:同一 enum band 内保持一致,优先级高于换前缀 ——
新错误码跟随 PTO_RUNTIME_ERR_BASE 是合理的。列在此处是为了说明
一旦开始往标识符里塞项目名,就会产生「跟哪一版项目名」的历史债
即 3.2 的佐证,不要求本 PR 处理。

3.4 build 与既有 bind 术语重叠

host 侧「这一轮把图做出来并送上去」这件事,仓库既有词汇是 bind
BindPhaseMarkrecord_bind_phaseHostPhaseKind::BindHostOrch/BindGraphUpload/BindArenaH2d
sm_layout::BindUsage,注释里满篇 "per-bind"/"this bind"。

本 PR 引入 build 作为并列的第三个词(bind/orchestration/build),
未说明它与 bind 是什么关系。同一段代码里:

const sm_layout::BindUsage bind_usage{...};   // bind
build.usage = bind_usage;                      // build
const BindPhaseMark graph_phase = ...          // bind

读者无法判断 "build" 是 "bind" 的子集、同义词还是新概念。最易腐化的一类命名债。

最低成本修法:在 header 里加一句说明两者关系。

3.5 hbg::build_graph 叠词,且同两词三种语序

runtime 名即 host_build_graphhbg 是其缩写,故 hbg::build_graph 展开为
host_build_graph::build_graph

同样两个词的三种语序:文件 host_graph_build.h、类型 GraphBuild、函数 build_graph
grep 时很难受。

3.6 build.ready 与 ready-queue 的 ready 语义撞车

该文件中 ready 是重载最狠的词:ready_queue_populationsready_queue_capacities
graph_readyReadyQueueCapacitiespopulations.ready[0..2]enqueue_ready
再加 build.ready(含义是「可以 upload 了」),需读上下文才能分辨。

建议uploadablebuild_complete 都比 ready 准。

3.7 结构体字段名与局部别名成对不一致

SharedMemoryHandle &host_sm_handle = build.sm_handle;   // sm_handle vs host_sm_handle
const sm_layout::BindUsage &bind_usage = build.usage;    // usage vs bind_usage

同一事物两个名字,出现 3 处。且 usage 单独看不知是什么的 usage ——
字段名比局部名信息量还少,应该反过来

3.8 upload_program_graph 的 "program" 有歧义

本意是 program-mode(对 kernel-mode),但 program 作名词读成「上传程序图」也完全通顺。
header 得专门写一句 "not a kernel capture path" 来排除误读 ——
需要注释消歧的名字,本身就是命名没到位

建议upload_for_program_mode 之类更直接。

3.9 做得好的改动 ✅

  • orch_l2args:按 codestyle 规则 13,L2 这类数字层级不该进标识符,这次顺手清掉,
    方向完全正确
  • HostOrchEntryPointstypedef 改为 using 别名,符合规范
  • 新增的 KernelCtxControlStateKernelExecutionState 未带项目名前缀
  • host_graph_build.h 的注释是 present-tense WHAT,符合 comments.md

4. Should-fix 明细

4.1 dep_gen_host_graph.h:26 注释失效

begin_capture()  — once per orchestration, from run_host_orchestration

调用点已移进 hbg::build_graphrun_host_orchestration 现在只是 wrapper。
doc-consistency.md §1,rename 后的引用应在同一 commit 内更新。

4.2 upload_program_graphrt->orchestrator = nullptr; 是死代码

src/a2a3/runtime/host_build_graph/host/runtime_maker.cpp:940
build_graphRAIIScopeGuard 在返回时已清过,进 upload 时必为 nullptr ——
UT BuildReturnsWithoutDeviceAllocationOrUpload 自己就断言了
EXPECT_EQ(rt->orchestrator, nullptr)
旁边那句 "Their work is done, so the pointers go early" 现在也不准确。

建议:只保留 rt->ops = nullptr;

4.3 AGENTS.md 引用仓库内不存在的文件 + 可疑外部域名

Use the user's supplied `kernel-mode-design.md` and its v9 final decisions
(https://icc.gt.tc/vllm-pto#v9-design)

kernel-mode-design.md 不在仓库里,icc.gt.tc 也不像官方域名。
docs/host-build-graph-kernel-contract.md 同样引用了这两个。

对照 CLAUDE.md「避免在文档或代码中包含私人信息」及 doc-consistency.md §3,
公开文档不该指向 reviewer 无法访问的私人材料

建议:把设计结论直接写进仓库文档,或至少去掉外链。

4.4 scalar_count wire ABI 变更

config_name_len_ 后的历史 padding 里塞 4 字节,static_assert 覆盖了全部字段 offset
sizeof,做法稳妥 ✅。

需确认的一点:scalar_count() == 0 无法区分「旧 artifact」与「真的没有 scalar 参数」
(注释已自承)。若后续要靠这个值做分支判断,需要另一个显式标记。

4.5 host_phase_trace_note_submitted 每次 upload 都调(Consider)

重复 upload 场景下 bind phase 统计会重复计数。目前只影响 DFX 数据,不影响功能。
record_bind_phase 系列同理。


5. CI red check 分析

结论:infra flake,非本 PR 引入。 证据链:

  1. 失败的是 L3/L4 多机 comm 用例 —— global_tload_mpirun_l3
    comm_global_domain_release failed -1)与 vector_add_mixed_l3
    (507018 → sched_error_code=100),均不走 HBG host build 路径
  2. 本 PR 唯一触及 onboard 的改动是 kernel-mode 门禁
    仅在 configured_mode() == SIMPLER_MODE_KERNEL 时触发,
    而本 PR 没有任何路径能进 kernel mode
  3. 决定性证据:同一份源码的上一个 head fa819996 在 run 34346936058
    network1 是 success。当前 commit 只是 rebase + squash
  4. 五个同栈 PR 于 08:48 同时触发,抢同一批 network1 设备
    (2171/2175 fail,2172/2173/2174 pass)—— 典型资源竞争特征

建议:re-run 该 job。若连续复现再深挖。按 discipline.md §5,不要留着红勾不管。


6. 其他检查

  • pto-isa pin ℹ️:当前 pin 在 5a4f74cb,本 PR 无任何 pto-isa include 变化,
    pto_isa.pin 未改动 —— advisory 级别,无需处理
  • codestyle#pragma once ✅|enum class ✅|host 侧 C++ 风格 ✅|
    无新增 PTO2 ✅|注释为 present-tense WHAT ✅
  • stub 覆盖完整性:四个 platform variant 的 CMakeLists 均已加入
    kernel_ctx_control.cpp / kernel_execution_state.cpp

7. 优先级汇总

优先级 理由
🔴 高 2.1 测量/提交边界 直接影响 PR 立意能否成立,且决定后续 H2/H3 走向
🔴 高 2.2 eager dlsym 致旧 .so 硬失败 影响面覆盖所有用户,收益为零(当前无实现)
🔴 高 3.1 hbg 撞名 潜伏编译陷阱,现在改成本最低
🔴 高 3.2 前缀漏进 C++ 类内别名 零 ABI 风险,只改新增的 5 个
🟡 中 §0 K1 快照已与上游分叉 决定本轮评审范围,建议先澄清
🟡 中 2.3/2.4 所有权与状态机 kernel-mode 消费者接入前必须定清楚
🟡 中 3.4 build/bind 术语 至少在 header 写一句两者关系
🟡 中 4.1/4.2/4.3 doc-consistency 与死代码
🟢 低 2.5/2.6/2.7、3.3/3.5–3.8、4.4/4.5 可留待后续 milestone

8. 结论

Approve H1 的重构思路,但有四条高优先级项建议在合入前处理。

核心判断:

  1. 拆分方向是对的graph_host_rebind_staging 是实打实的 bug 修复,
    UT 质量高,a2a3/a5 对称无遗漏
  2. 但边界没切干净(2.1)—— 这是一个显式定义 host build 边界的 PR,
    边界本身留着测量/提交混合的话,后面四个 milestone 都会沿着这条线长
  3. 2.2 的影响面超出本 PR 立意 —— 为当前无实现的能力,让所有旧 .so
    worker 初始化硬失败,这个代价与收益不成比例
  4. 3.1/3.2 是零风险改动,现在改成本最低,拖到后续 milestone 只会更贵

另建议澄清 §0 的评审范围问题:本 PR 当前包含一份已被上游放弃的 ctx_control 设计。

@TaoZQY TaoZQY changed the title Refactor: [H1] separate HBG host build from device upload Refactor: [H1] measure HBG graphs before device upload Sep 11, 2026
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Expose a leased Host build result without committing device regions or
uploading graph data. Include every Graph invocation's body in queue
sizing, and reject invalid Definitions or capacity overflow before any
program-mode allocation or H2D.

Share Definition packing and upload across architectures. Retain offsets
for in-place objects, preserve spill ownership, and rebind moved staging
in both records and the leased workspace before a fallible copy so
repeated upload and retry keep valid sources.

Group borrowed buffers and RuntimeContext in LeasedWorkspace. Keep the
build noncopyable and nonmovable, invalidate failed rebuilds, and consume
precomputed capacities in upload_for_program_mode. Use simpler::hbg and
existing runtime status codes without adding public kernel ABI or worker
symbol-loading changes.

Cover complete Graph sizing, exact and exceeded capacity, invalid images,
workspace affinity, repeated uploads and failed-copy recovery on both
architectures. Document the Host ownership and program/kernel boundary.
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已根据本轮评审修订,当前提交为 caf9d9da,保持 H1 阶段、单个 commit、Draft。主要修改如下:

  1. 收敛到独立 H1。 基于 main 移除此前夹带的旧 K1 快照,包括 ctx_control、kernel 入口占位、worker eager dlsym 和 scalar-count ABI 改动。本 PR 现在只包含 Host build 与 H2D 拆分及相应校验、测试。
  2. 在 build 阶段完成校验和容量计算。 build_graph 完成 Host orchestration、Definition 合法性校验、每次 Graph 调用的内部任务统计,以及完整 ready queue 容量推导。超过容量限制时,在设备分配/H2D 前返回错误,避免上传一部分后才发现容量不足。
  3. 上传消费已有构建结果。 提取两种架构共用的 Definition packing plan;upload_for_program_mode 根据已生成的布局和容量完成 Definition 上传、设备地址绑定及 runtime image 上传,不再重复统计 Graph body。现有 program 路径仍按 build → upload 执行。
  4. 明确资源借用和构建状态。LeasedWorkspace 统一表达借用的 RuntimeContext、SM mirror 和 Definition staging;GraphBuild 显式禁止复制/移动,使用 build_complete 表达结果是否有效。重新 build 失败会使旧结果失效,upload 会在设备操作前拒绝不匹配的 RuntimeContext。
  5. 修复扩容与失败重试。 Definition staging 扩容后,在可能失败的 H2D 前同步更新 GraphHostState 和 LeasedWorkspace 的地址/容量,避免保留旧地址。重复上传及失败后重试不会累加队列统计,也不会修改原始 virtual-heap mirror 的地址基准。
  6. 统一接口命名和说明。 使用 simpler::hbg 命名空间,明确 bind_usagehost_sm_handleupload_for_program_mode 的含义;修正过期注释、重复清理及任务计数,补充仓内可独立阅读的契约文档。

当前流程:输入 entry points / args + 借用的 Host workspace → Host build / Definition 校验 / 完整容量计算 → GraphBuild → program-mode 设备分配与 H2D → 供现有执行路径使用的设备图像。 这里的 program upload 仍包含分配和同步拷贝,不能直接用于 kernel capture;kernel context prepare 和 launch 对接属于后续阶段。

验证结果:

  • 两种架构各 16 个 H1 C++ 用例通过,覆盖容量边界、非法 Definition、workspace 不匹配、失败重建、扩容及上传重试;相关缺陷先通过失败用例复现。
  • 两套 H1 用例通过 ASan(含泄漏检测);本地 HBG 仿真 A2/A3:20 passed、7 skipped,A5:21 passed。ASan 和仿真覆盖最终仅修正 %zu 日志格式前的等价功能版本,最终提交再次通过两套 H1 单测和相关 pre-commit 检查。
  • 运行库构建、严格文档构建和 pre-commit 通过。
  • 当前提交的远端 CI 已全部成功,包含 A2/A3、A5 仿真和上板、network1、deepseek;docs build 成功,deploy 跳过。这些结果不代表已完成混跑 capture/replay、CSA 精度或性能验证。

后续 #2172#2175 需要同步新的 H1 接口,尤其注意:build 的队列统计已经包含每次 Graph 调用的内部任务,下游容量计算不能再次累加。

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592-637: 📐 Maintainability & Code Quality | 🔵 Trivial | 🏗️ Heavy lift

The build measurement block is duplicated verbatim across both architectures. The packing call, the overflow log text, the bind_usage construction, and the image_bytes/heap_bytes formulas are identical in both files. The PR shares definition packing but not this sizing logic, so a later change to one architecture can silently diverge from the other.

  • src/a2a3/runtime/host_build_graph/host/runtime_maker.cpp#L592-L637: extract the packing, overflow reporting, and sizing steps into one shared helper in src/common/host_build_graph/host/.
  • src/a5/runtime/host_build_graph/host/runtime_maker.cpp#L1242-L1287: call that shared helper instead of keeping the second copy.
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In `@src/a2a3/runtime/host_build_graph/host/runtime_maker.cpp` around lines 592 -
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packing, ready-queue overflow reporting, bind_usage construction, and
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In `@src/a2a3/runtime/host_build_graph/host/runtime_maker.cpp`:
- Around line 592-637: Extract the duplicated graph build measurement
flow—including definition packing, ready-queue overflow reporting, bind_usage
construction, and image_bytes/heap_bytes sizing—into a shared helper under
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